Laura V. Hilton – Excerpt – Part 2 of 2

Shannon here: Amish Romance author, Laura V. Hilton shares an excerpt from her February release, The Amish Wanderer. Comment or answer the question at the end of the post to enter the drawing. Winner’s choice of any of her titles. Print or E-book for U.S. E-book for International. Deadline: Oct 15th, 11:59 pm central time. Here’s Laura:

Amish Wanderer by Laura V. Hiltonlaura-v-hilton


An unidentified sound, loud in the relative silence, jarred Bethany. Her blue pen made a squiggly line across the page in the fat little notebook where she wrote her thoughts. Maybe she should’ve found a more secluded place than the hay pile beside the loft ladder, but she rarely was disturbed. She raised her head and listened.

Nothing, except the squeak of the wood doors in the back of the barn as her younger brother, Timothy, put the cows out to pasture. The soft lowing of cows. The clucking of free-range chickens.

Hopefully, he was too busy to notice she’d left—and wouldn’t look for her.

But there it was again. From somewhere overhead. A sound that didn’t belong. A creak and a thump.

Hopefully, it wasn’t Hen. She’d hear if he were out of jail, ain’t so? A thread of fear ripped through her, unraveling the tiny bit of peace she’d been able to find.

Bethany capped the pen, shot to her feet, and hid the notebook under a loose piece of wood in the floor. Then she scampered up the ladder to the lower loft.


She climbed higher, to the upper one, some thirty feet from the ground.

Peeking over the edge, she scanned the open floor. And… there… someone was wrapped in the old ratty blanket Daed kept in the barn for strays, as he called them. Mamm called them wanderers. She wouldn’t be happy to learn one bedded down in their loft while Daed was gone—incarcerated, of sorts, in a mental hospital, after he tried to kill all the black cats in their district.

The cats lived. They had nine lives, ain’t so? But Daed was institutionalized and his assistant, the one who actually carried out Daed’s deranged wishes, Hen Stutzman, was locked up in jail awaiting trial for arson. As if a man should be punished for obeying crazy orders. Well, they had been horrible things, so it was warranted.

And here she’d thought Hen came around so often to see her. Though she’d come to dread his visits.

Her head, and heart, were permanently bowed in shame. Now no one would ever come calling.

Especially if they ever found out… Nein. They couldn’t. She’d never tell.

Life would never be the same.

Okay, maybe that was a bit overly dramatic. But still…

Bethany’s eyes burned. She blinked to clear the watery haze.

What were they going to do with Daed gone?

A black Amish hat covered the face of whoever slept up on the hay-strewn floor of the loft. His body was swaddled like a newborn boppli in an effort to keep warm, most likely. Almost like Baby Jesus in the manger. Except it was a man. Not a boppli.

And definitely not Hen. This man was taller and much thinner. Relief flooded her.

She started to descend the ladder. It wouldn’t do for a vagabond to discover her alone, almost in the loft with him. Not even if something about it reminded her of the live nativity scenes she’d seen downtown at one of the Englischer’s churches.

Little Lord Jesus asleep in the hay… The tune ran, uninvited, through her thoughts.

A board on the ladder creaked and snapped under Bethany’s weight. She dangled, her feet flailing, from the top of the ladder. Too far to fall without breaking something. Or killing herself.

Why hadn’t she noticed the crack in the wood when she’d climbed up?

She let out a strangled cry when her fingers started slipping from the worn wood. The man blasted upright, his hat falling away to reveal shocks of sun-streaked light brown hair. He struggled free of the blanket, and half-crawled to the edge of the loft.

“Are you okay?” His warm, callused hands closed around hers.

His hand was strong. Warm. Work-roughened. She glanced at his fingers, curled around hers. Unexpected sparks shot up her arms. It had nothing to do with her life hanging in the balance. Or maybe it did. She looked down at the floor thirty feet below again. And whimpered.

“Grab my hands. I’ll pull you up.”

Up. In the loft. Alone with him?


Clinging to him seemed a gut idea though. And if it’d save her from falling…

Her shin made contact with the broken rung a moment before her tennis shoe found another ladder rail. She let out a breath she hadn’t realized she held. “I’m fine.” Now. She pulled her hands free one at a time and lowered herself. A step. Two. Three…

He stepped out onto the ladder and started down after her.

Nice looking… Wait. He followed her? She needed to find her brother. Or call for him. “Timothy!” There was safety in numbers. Sidetracked watching his quick descent instead of concentrating on her own in her hurry to escape, her feet slipped off the rung. Her hands caught only slivers and—

A far away scream reached her ears. She recognized it as her own as she plunged through the air.

“Hey, wait,” the stranger called after her.

As if she could.

Her body hit something. The hay she’d been sitting on? “Ooof.” Arms wrapped around her, then… darkness.


“You shoved her!” Timothy’s voice sounded from somewhere above her, filled with anger—and fear.

Gut. She was safe. She dared relax.

Hands ran roughly over her arms and legs. Not Timothy’s hands. These hands were bigger, stronger… yet gentle, too. Hands that left tingles where they touched. Strange, this reaction to a stranger. To anyone.

“Nein, I didn’t. She slipped. I was trying to help.”

“If I hadn’t almost caught her, she would’ve died. Her blood would be on your hands,” Timothy almost shouted.

Her head throbbed. The front of her head ached, not from the fall but tension. Maybe. It might’ve been from the fall. She must’ve fainted.

“Who are you anyway, and what are you doing in our barn?” Timothy’s voice cracked and the pitch changed, the way buwe voices did in adolescence.

“I don’t think she broke anything.” The stranger, whose voice seemed familiar in some way, rolled her over and slid his hand down her spine. As if he’d be able to feel a broken back.

He moved her back again, his hands investigating her ribs, brushing against her… This went way too far. Too intimate. Who gave him such liberties anyway?

She forced her eyes open.

The stranger’s gaze, just as lost and confused as everyone else’s, fixed on hers.

She sat up, ignoring the wave of dizziness as she stared into hazel eyes. Something…

She tried to think of something witty to say. Failing that, she lapsed into silence and studied him closer.

Memories of a lemonade summer, one or two years ago, flashed as he withdrew his hands. His image waved, swayed, doubled.


About Laura: Award winning author, Laura Hilton, her husband, Steve, and their five children make their home in Arkansas. She is a pastor’s wife, a stay-at-home mom and home-schools. Laura is also a breast cancer survivor.

Her publishing credits include three books in the Amish of Seymour series , The Amish of Webster County series, her first Christmas novel, A White Christmas in Webster County, as well as the Amish of Jamesport series. Other credits include Swept Away from Abingdon Press’ Quilts of Love series. Laura is contracted for another three book Amish series set in the Jamesport area, with the first book releasing in May 2016, followed by two more Amish books and a Christmas story releasing in Fall 2016, Spring 2017 and Fall 2017 respectively.

She has self-published a Christmas novella, Christmas Mittens.

Laura is a member of American Christian Fiction Writers and a professional book reviewer and blogs for Putting on the New and Seriously Write. Learn more and connect:

Lighthouse Academy Blog              Laura’s Blog               Laura’s Twitter

Laura’s Facebook               Laura’s Pinterest

About the book – The Amish Wanderer:

Bethany Weiss has been fascinated by Silas Beiler since he spent a couple of years in Jamesport, Missouri, before he and his family moved to another Amish community. They hadn’t kept in touch, but she hasn’t forgotten the friendly young man who brought her lemonade and took her home once from a Singing years ago. When she finds a man sleeping in her family’s barn, like Jesus sleeping in the hay, she is stunned to recognize Silas. He’s left the Amish and is backpacking across the country. She talks him into staying, at least until after Christmas.

Silas’ family has never been happy living in one area for long, and their vagabond ways are wearing on him. He’s lived in Amish communities all over the nation, moving whenever his daed became disgruntled with the leaders, and he’s looking for some sense of stability. His intentions are to make it back to Pennsylvania and stay with his Englisch onkle and his family—and pursue an education. Will Bethany be the one to bring Silas in from the cold? Or will he continue on his way to his extended family and become Englisch?

Can’t wait for the drawing? Purchase any of Laura’s books now: 

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Question for Readers: Did you ever play or find your happy place in a barn as a kid? If so, was it at your home, a relative’s, or friend’s?

Come back Oct 10th for Michelle Griep!


13 Responses to “Laura V. Hilton – Excerpt – Part 2 of 2”

  • Shelia Hall says:

    I did when I would go with my dad to milk the cow and feed the chickens at our home

  • Laura Hilton says:

    thanks for hosting me, Shannon!

  • Andrea Woodard says:

    can’t wait to read this book. sounds like its going to be great

  • I’ve enjoyed having you, Laura.

    I grew up in the city, but both of my grandparents had farms. One barn was full of chickens and I helped gather eggs. My cousin loved it, but I thought it was yucky and smelly. The other grandparents’ barn was just for fun. The cousins dared each other to jump out of the loft. We set up houses with couches and beds made of hay. Oh how I loved that barn. An ice storm brought it down a few years back 🙁

  • Diane Wallace says:

    I have played in relatives’ barns when I was a child and always had a good time. Didn’t have barns in the city where I grew up!
    “The Amish Wanderer” sounds like it is a good book. Thank you for the opportunity to win a copy😊

  • Maryann says:

    Yes I actually found my happy place in a barn! My uncle owned a farm in Ohio and every year we would take a summer road trip from New Jersey to visit his family. I would watch the cows in the field with some binoculars until they went back into the barn at night and then I always chased the dog and cat into another barn where the tractor was! Good times growing up!

  • Elaine Stock says:

    I learned about this blog feature on Laura and had to drop by for a visit. Like all of your novels, The Amish Wanderer sounds like a great read and I hope it sells well, Laura.

    Nice blog, Shannon.

  • Thanks for the compliment, Elaine.

  • Jennifer Hibdon says:

    Hi, Shannon and Laura. I enjoyed the excerpt and can’t wait to read it. I really liked The Birdhouse, Laura. Thanx for the giveaway.

  • Connie Saunders says:

    I grew up in town and we didn’t have a barn but in back of our house there was a garage that wasn’t used to store a car so my brother and, along with neighbor kids, used that as play store. There was a wooden counter and we sold groceries and cooked also. I am a baby boomer so our summers and weekends were spent playing outdoors. We used our imaginations to create wonderful playtime activities and I am so glad we could!
    Thanks for sharing this post and offering this giveaway.

  • Patty wright says:

    No one had a barn near me. No relatives either.

  • stvannatter says:

    I have a winner! Patty Wright won the drawing. I appreciate Laura for being my guest and everyone else for stopping by.

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